apocalipsis chapter 4 page 6
January 26th, 2021

apocalipsis chapter 4 page 6

Here is the new page hahaha just introduced a new guy, tuukul means mind in Maya

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  1. ColdFusion

    I think that should be ‘nervous system AND muscles’ right? Those are two different systems.
    success* and I don’t think you want ‘ratio’ there, you want ‘your chance of successfully beating me is less than 1%” (you also left out the ‘less’)
    If that won’t fit in the bubble, just “Your likelihood of beating me is less than 1%” will do

    I’ve corrected enough grammar so I’ll leave the math alone XD she could have a 0.5% chance!

  2. Bob

    I think it should be ‘psychic mayaN monster’
    ‘My brain leveled UP a lot’
    A success ratio (as in 1 to 5) is different than a percentage. I think “the odds of you beating me are less than 1%” is the way to go.

    Tuukul, as in Too Cool? As in Tuukul for school? Sweet.

    Lucky for Tuukul that Psychic type Pokémon are strong against Fighters types like Jinx here (and, weirdly enough, the Jinx Pokémon is a Psychic type).

  3. ColdFusion

    Oh hey good catches Bob.

  4. tavo2

    Thanks Cold and Bob , arrggg did many mistakes this time, anyway maya stays because I’m using the spanish wording because they called themselves like that

  5. ColdFusion

    Yeah they are the maya people, they have mayan temples and stuff.

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