March 15th, 2011
Battle Plan
Sorry for the delay yesterday I was having a writer block (I knew A and C but I didnt have the B)
for compensation I opened a deviant art account and put my first fan art .
The next updateds are going to be gritty and action styled I hope you dont mind.
March 15th, 2011 at 11:18 pm
No one can resist ice cream.
Also, you wrote ‘for for’ when I think you meant ‘for all.’
March 15th, 2011 at 11:46 pm
I can’t wait!! 😀
Okay here are your corrections:
panel 1 appears to have spacing problems with ‘where the’ and ‘to lower’ but it might just be my eyes.
I think panel 2 is trying to say “once and for all”
Last panel should probably say “for only 2 pieces of gold” UNLESS he’s trying to say “you can have it, but only if you pay” I just assumed he was trying to make the price sound low.
March 16th, 2011 at 12:13 am
thanks Cold
March 16th, 2011 at 12:31 am
I don’t know, but I think Pilli might not be a good strategist. From extensive video game playing, I know that protecting a position surrounded by monsters isn’t exactly easy.
March 16th, 2011 at 12:32 am
Oh gee my avatar has changed. I liked my little eyebleeding guy too :(.