July 30th, 2014
pilli remix 18
Probably righ now Im way home lets hope thre is no gremlins aboard,
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Probably righ now Im way home lets hope thre is no gremlins aboard,
you can follow my tumblr or the superweyes facebook and tumblr to see my adventures guest starring the superweyes
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July 30th, 2014 at 6:20 pm
Woo, such memories.
So um, in this case you can’t really use ‘require’, it should just be ‘need’
And you should put a comma after ‘win’ and ‘hips’ and take it out after ‘game’
July 30th, 2014 at 7:22 pm
Arggg
July 30th, 2014 at 8:02 pm
ps thanks, in fact I didnt write the dialogue in this one I got help from someone else a long time ago.
July 31st, 2014 at 12:45 am
Now that didn’t backfire, did it?
July 31st, 2014 at 6:11 pm
Sorry, not ‘win’ in first panel, ‘win’ in the second panel, that’s the ‘win’ that needs a comma.. and a period after ‘exactly’ in the second panel.
and then a comma after ‘hips’ in the third, and remove the comma after ‘game’ in the fourth
If it makes you feel better, most americans suck at this too. Nobody uses commas or apostrophes or colons properly.
July 31st, 2014 at 8:11 pm
“The team with the most points at the end of the game, wins.”
And, IIRC, the losers are sacrificed to the gods. (I’m sure that there are more than a few sports fans who wouldn’t mind seeing that happen these days after losing a bet on the Superbowl, World Series, or NBA Playoffs…)
August 1st, 2014 at 6:54 pm
People often pause there but it’s not correct to put a comma there. If there was, it would be “The team, with the most points at the end of the game, wins”
But it’s not an allusion, it’s a prepositional phrase followed by a one-word predicate