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Instead of ‘SOON’ try ‘LATER’, it makes far more sense. Soon is like you/the character is anticipating to something. And ‘later’ is just that, a forward point in time.
The story keeps getting better! Keep up the good work!
September 1st, 2014 at 1:07 pm
i can’t believe he said that.
but it was fun
September 1st, 2014 at 4:27 pm
Start final boss music, now
September 1st, 2014 at 8:47 pm
GRAH!!! whoa.
also you either want to change “it’s” to “is” in panel 2, or add a comma after corpse instead.
September 1st, 2014 at 11:19 pm
Instead of ‘SOON’ try ‘LATER’, it makes far more sense. Soon is like you/the character is anticipating to something. And ‘later’ is just that, a forward point in time.
The story keeps getting better! Keep up the good work!
September 2nd, 2014 at 9:55 pm
fixed arrggg making too many mistakes,
annyway glad that you enjoy the latest story arc