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September 11th, 2008

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I really hope that I didnt had grammar mistakes in this strip.

is a long time since I did only a black and white picture maybe my color sucks

or I take to much time other stuff and my lines suffer my next comic will be probably black and white.

^ 3 Comments...

  1. Desdemondo

    I think the words and writing for this were good. I like both the 2D and 3D, but I think that it should be 3D backgrounds + foregrounds/characters, and 2D backgrounds + foregrounds/characters, but not a mix of 3D and 2D in the same panel.

    But this comic strip was done very well. The only thing that I would recommend is that you work on the texturing of Lupe so that she looks more like cloth and less like… shiny hard stuff, like in her hair.

  2. algeya

    Thanks for your comment Desmondo,
    thanks for the critique since I experiment a lot with the comic sometimes
    kinda trial and error (more errors than anything else)
    , and Yes Lupe will need some work,

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