Battle Plan
March 15th, 2011

Battle Plan


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Sorry for the delay yesterday I was having a writer block (I knew A and C but I didnt have the B)
for compensation I opened a deviant art account and put my first fan art .
The next updateds are going to be gritty and action styled I hope you dont mind.

^ 5 Comments...

  1. David Herbert

    No one can resist ice cream.

    Also, you wrote ‘for for’ when I think you meant ‘for all.’

  2. ColdFusion

    I can’t wait!! 😀
    Okay here are your corrections:
    panel 1 appears to have spacing problems with ‘where the’ and ‘to lower’ but it might just be my eyes.
    I think panel 2 is trying to say “once and for all”
    Last panel should probably say “for only 2 pieces of gold” UNLESS he’s trying to say “you can have it, but only if you pay” I just assumed he was trying to make the price sound low.

  3. tavo2

    thanks Cold

  4. Varkson

    I don’t know, but I think Pilli might not be a good strategist. From extensive video game playing, I know that protecting a position surrounded by monsters isn’t exactly easy.

  5. Varkson

    Oh gee my avatar has changed. I liked my little eyebleeding guy too :(.

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