May 21st, 2012
the living game part 2
the plot tickens
Anyway this week Ive doing a diet I lost 5 kg but today I was invited to a party so probably I gained again those kilos,
In other news people got ma at me at the local comibook store because the revanger arc was too short and wanted to see more instead of giving these living game story…..
(at least they should wait a little before they hate the story)
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May 21st, 2012 at 6:30 am
I have seen pilli’s mom before and she reminds me of my mom.
First post yay!
May 21st, 2012 at 11:08 am
That is a really nice effect on the mom in the last panel.
Panel 3 is interesting. You could put it as the gramatically correct phrase “A NON rat infested” but is not as hip or cool with the kids as the next phrase.
A more hip and modern phrase that would be accepted by everyone is “a NOT rat infested room”, but my teacher would take off points because it is not “traditional” per say.
Why “NOT rat infested” is accepted but “rat NOT infested” is wrong is something that I cannot figure out why, probably because it is not part of traditional English but rather is a new invention made up and used by young people.
May 21st, 2012 at 12:43 pm
oh the more you know.
anyway would have been a lot easier if I just used “guest room” but in fact that room is really rat infected.
Edd I dont know what I would do without you
May 21st, 2012 at 10:18 pm
Yes give them cake
May 21st, 2012 at 10:57 pm
wow, being recognized!!
Psst, you should still remove the “is” before “across the hall” because you said ‘is’ already at the beginning.
May 22nd, 2012 at 1:14 am
THIS IS INGLISH!! and we respect its autoritah!!
May 22nd, 2012 at 1:23 am
sorry sorry ,
kinda a messy day today it wont happen again
May 22nd, 2012 at 7:45 pm
Another awesome comic I discovered today, I’ll dig into the story soon!
I love your art and style!
May 22nd, 2012 at 9:36 pm
thank you, is always nice to see new faces here, I promess I´ll keep working and making decent comics
May 22nd, 2012 at 10:33 pm
It pains me to say, but you switched ‘rat’ and ‘not’ when you fixed that last time.
This must be very frustrating for you ^^’ just remember, if any of us tried to write a comic in espanol it’d be utterly unreadable.
May 22nd, 2012 at 11:00 pm
arrggg