November 14th, 2012
star girl a kit koma conclusion
And they are going to be fine…
Kinda super busy I´ve been preparing for the festo and kinda super nervous,
anyway next friday Pilli will be back and monday Ive no idea , I really must create a buffer,
November 14th, 2012 at 6:49 pm
There’s some grammar issues here that aren’t exactly ‘wrong’ but aren’t how anyone would talk..
you could easily answer ‘are you okay?’ with ‘i’m fine’ but you’d never ask ‘are you fine’
second panel best to remove ‘away’ and change ‘taught how to stop’ to ‘taught me to stop”
also hEEeee this is great.
November 14th, 2012 at 7:09 pm
sorry in fact I fixed those mistakes in the morning but forgot to send it to my server, anyway I dont know what to do without you guys, you are the best editors ever,
November 15th, 2012 at 5:06 pm
I love the last panel. You can tell she’s hurting him both physically and with the thought of having to eat her cooking haha. Great ending to the story.
November 15th, 2012 at 10:47 pm
thanks Im glad that you liked the story for a momment I thought no one liked the ending