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Panel 6
Small grammatical mistake here. It should be “low ranking member….” to show that it flows into the next sentence (or leave out the period). Or it could be “WHO can only do scout (or scouting but scout is acceptable)”.
But panel 8 and 9 are OK since there is no period after “get the beer ready”.
I see the stinger, but I wonder if Paco could be able to fight Jinx.
fixed, thanks.
I think I over did the comic and should made two pages of this strip teh pacing would be better and the last panel would have worked for the end of the week cliffhanger
sometimes there’s just a lot of dialogue, what can you do?
HEhehehehe oh Paco.. you’re one of the greatest characters of all time. Right up there with Bender.
September 28th, 2011 at 5:03 am
Panel 6
Small grammatical mistake here. It should be “low ranking member….” to show that it flows into the next sentence (or leave out the period). Or it could be “WHO can only do scout (or scouting but scout is acceptable)”.
But panel 8 and 9 are OK since there is no period after “get the beer ready”.
I see the stinger, but I wonder if Paco could be able to fight Jinx.
September 28th, 2011 at 4:52 pm
fixed, thanks.
I think I over did the comic and should made two pages of this strip teh pacing would be better and the last panel would have worked for the end of the week cliffhanger
September 28th, 2011 at 9:23 pm
I guess the Yetos are a reference to the Zetas, but every time I read their name, Chetos comes to my mind.
September 28th, 2011 at 10:12 pm
shhhh you will get me in trouble those are yetos not zetas
September 28th, 2011 at 11:04 pm
sometimes there’s just a lot of dialogue, what can you do?
HEhehehehe oh Paco.. you’re one of the greatest characters of all time. Right up there with Bender.
September 29th, 2011 at 6:04 am
Ah shit, it’s about to go down!
Technically, since her friends are there it would be 3 vs 1. My money is on Paco still though.
@Coldfusion: Word.
September 30th, 2011 at 12:30 am
I kind of want to see them fight for real.